PB1A 4/3/16
Summer
is fast approaching, and everything is up in the air. I have many ideas what I would
like to do but timing, money and where I would stay become big factors that
conflict each other. Leaving me utterly unsure of my plans. But aside from
taking summer session I certainly want to plan a camping trip to Zion National
park located in Utah. I love the liberty that hiking up a canyon brings, the
feeling of empowerment and achievement. Because Zion is eight hours away there
is preparation that need to be done. So when I need a break from studying I
read National Geographic articles concerning possible hikes, camping sites, and
possible weather conditions one might encounter.
Hike
the Zion Narrows, Utah by Kate Siber discusses the
inspirational location that attracts many knee hikers, nationally. The intended
audience is whoever is interested in taking a natural excursion in Utah. It
appeals to people who want to challenge themselves because Sider describes the
hike as not “necessarily a cakewalk” but a 16 mile hike that involves walking multiple
miles in knee high water levels. Indicating that the potential hikers might
need some prior experience to handle this challenging day trip. The context
includes the author’s personal experience that she shares in an informative
relatively short article. She firmly speaks upon the difficulty of the hike by
including the length, the overnight expectancy, and possible misconceptions. Sider
perhaps assumes that her potential reader has been on hikes before because she references
some backpacking terms such as “gap year, tourist trail, and visa run.” In her
context Sider also fails to address the best time to go on this adventure and
other potential safety hazards that one may encounter. This writing piece has a
direct and tranquil tone that makes the audience feel confident they can trust
the author’s outlook. Sider provides this security by writing in an informative
form as well as encouraging people that this is a hike worth taking.
I
would classify this article as a travel description, when one think of vacation
or a weekend getaway, gathering information becomes crucial in order to be well
prepared. Conventions of a general travel description might include: access to
the location, possible scenery, rocks and plants that can be a challenge to
overcome, equipment required, shortcuts, and finally the best time of the year
to visit. Sider’s articles addresses many of the basic facts that people can
expect, she also adds a very beneficial “Need to Know” section that gives more
detail on transportation that one might need. Lastly I feel as she genuinely
cares for the readers because she provides phone numbers about permits, which shows
she wants people to get the best experience with little difficulty. Overall
this article does the job it’s supposed to do which is to educate people, it is
very direct sharing just the facts not too personal, she could have detailed
her favorite moment of the hike or how she felt afterwards. This additional
information that is missing, would help the audience connect with the author because
one wants to feel like “if she can do it, I feel capable of undertaking this
hike as well.”
Very interesting introduction...caught my attention and I really wanted to read more.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your introduction because you're providing a backstory to why your writing about travel descriptions. When I first started reading it I was a bit confused to why you were talking about your summer plans, but I think that it flowed really well into your discussion about the article. Also, I really liked that you included examples from the text to support what you're saying. I think its good that you clearly state all of the rhetorical features in the end to reiterate your main point.
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